Fic commentary meme

[kalleah]

Snagging from the_tenzo and several others.

How it works:
You go to my master list and pick a one-shot, or a single chapter of one of my multichapters, and comment to this post with your selection. I have links to commentaries I've done previously along with the story link on the master list, so no fair picking something I've already commentated upon (unless it's a different chapter of a multi-chapter story) . I then (as a separate post) do a commentary about that fic, which may or may not include canon meta, wondering what on Earth I was thinking, tmi, and general arsing around.

Comments

[papilio-luna.livejournal.com]

Tenses and Pronouns, part 2 :D

[kalleah.livejournal.com]

Here you are! (http://kalleah.livejournal.com/410008.html)

[papilio-luna.livejournal.com]

Back atcha!

[kalleah.livejournal.com]

Here you are! (http://kalleah.livejournal.com/409834.html)

[2nd2ndalto.livejournal.com]

Through the Ice. :)