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Pairing: Ten/Rose
Rating: PG
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In this chapter: The End.

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Faster than the speed of light, the communication line crossed through space-time from one relay point to another, and another, until it connected to its final destination. The voice on the receiving end was thick with sleep and took a few seconds to respond, but its fury was immediately evident.

"Where the hell have you been? The envoy has already left and I have to hear about the report from someone on Regel?"

"Listen closely," said the other voice. "I'm only going to say this once and you'd best be paying attention." Even with the masking distortion provided by Ugolin encryption, there was a command in the words that had never before been present in the transmissions from Arisbe Project. "You're going to walk away from this. Find some nice job somewhere that never, ever, ever involves planetary modification projects. I really don't care what that is. The important thing is that I'm giving you one chance, and one chance only."

"What kind of a joke is this?" hissed the recipient.

"Oh, it's no joke. It's the most deadly serious conversation you've ever had. Frances and Wilson Wittener –"

"Don't say any names!"

"—are dead. Arisbe Project has passed its inspection. Somehow, it turns out that they've been on schedule with their conversion all along! I wonder how that happened?" A chuckle came over the line, and the recipient was momentarily silent. "I've got documentation of every encrypted communication between you and the Witteners for the past two years. I've also got the coordinates of your present location."

"Impossible." The voice sounded relieved. "Ugolin encryption is unbreakable. Even if you had the logs, what good would it do you? We have nine relay points between us. It would take you a lifetime to track me down."

"You'd think that, wouldn't you? Well, it turns out I'm fairly persistent once you start murdering people. Let me send you something that might change your mind."

What flashed along the communication line wasn't a voice but a stream of data. Coordinates on a grid. Employment records. A university transcript. Shopping lists from favorite stores. Photographs.

"Impossible," said the voice, but this time, it sounded more pleading than defiant.

"I'm giving you one chance. I strongly suggest that you take it. Turn off this device and walk away. Take what you can carry with you and start a new life. Don't ever look back."

"Who are you?" came the whispered reply.

"I'm the voice you'll hear in every nightmare you'll have for the rest of your life. I'm the conscience you stopped listening to years ago. I'm the fear you feel when a dark shadow follows you at night. I'm the Doctor, and I'm telling you to run."

..

Rose Tyler stood on the top of a cliff overlooking the ocean. The wind whipped her hair all around her and she tried to hold it back with one hand. "It's beautiful," she said to the Doctor, next to her, who was smiling and inhaling deeply.

"Breathe it in, all that good, clean air," he crowed. "We helped make that air, you and I, centuries ago. It's the same air, really. It just gets recycled."

This was not the same Arisbe she had come to know. That Arisbe was still a vast desert with the barest beginning of life taking hold in the form of a fragile colony underneath an atmospheric shell. This Arisbe was a vibrant world in full flower, with an ocean spread out below them and the call of seabirds in the air. All that water had been frozen and locked away when she had last been on this world, and no life had thrived in the arid landscape.

"This is Crater Harbour, in the southern hemisphere. It's the largest impact site from the planetary modification project. Quite the tourist destination, although we're here in the off-season. Gets a bit windy in the winter," he said, half yelling at her although she wasn't more than two paces away.

She leaned toward him to avoid having to shout in return. "Are we far from the project?"

"Other side of the world. It's not there anymore, of course, although there's a park and a nice monument. Lots of trees, Rose, and people, too."

"It's perfect," she said. "Are you ready?"

He nodded and removed a clear jar from his coat pocket. She took it from him and took a step forward. As she did, she unscrewed the lid and let the wind stir the first of the fine, white powder inside the jar.

"Frances and Wilson Wittener," she pronounced solemnly. "Welcome back to Arisbe."

With a smooth motion, she sent a cascade of their remains out beyond the cliff's edge. The powder caught in the wind and became a small cloud, dissipating as it descended toward the ocean waves.

Rose stood perfectly still until it was gone. Something inside her yearned for a few words to say about the departed at their memorial service, but she wasn't sure what to say.

"He couldn't live without her," she said finally, and put the jar in her pocket.

"Chose not to," the Doctor corrected.

"That was real, wasn't it? That he loved her."

"Yes," he said simply. "I do think that." He came behind her and wrapped his arms around her waist, letting his chin rest on her shoulder. His long coat flapped wildly around them.

"I think it might be time to get out of the wind," she said, suddenly realizing how cold she was.

"Where?"

"Somewhere warm." She was shivering against him now. "Wait, weren't we trying for that before?"

"Lycoras," mused the Doctor into her ear. "What a brilliant idea."

Date: 2008-03-13 12:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brilliantomega.livejournal.com
Such a nice conclusion. Brilliant. ::stands up and claps::

Date: 2008-03-13 01:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kalleah.livejournal.com
::curtseys::

Date: 2008-03-13 12:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rebelsaint.livejournal.com
"I'm the voice you'll hear in every nightmare you'll have for the rest of your life. I'm the conscience you stopped listening to years ago. I'm the fear you feel when a dark shadow follows you at night. I'm the Doctor, and I'm telling you to run."

I absolutely love that. Almost gives me chills, but I can hear him saying it.

Thank you for such a lovely journey.

Date: 2008-03-13 01:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kalleah.livejournal.com
I do love a good self-righteous Doctor rant. I'm glad this one sounded plausible to you.

Date: 2008-03-13 12:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] clinicallybored.livejournal.com
Absolutely perfect end to an amazing story.

I'm continually impressed with your writing. Every time I finish a chapter, I feel like going back and starting over. All your characters, the canon and otherwise, are so wonderfully real and echo so well for me.

As brilliantomega said, "Brilliant."

So...when's the next part, then?

Date: 2008-03-13 01:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kalleah.livejournal.com
You make me blush. Thank you.

So...when's the next part, then?

I'll be around, never fear. I actually don't know what the next piece will be. I've been working on a story with Nine and Jacob the monk right after the Time War, although I suspect that may take me some time to flesh out the way I want it. I also have some plans for Ten and Rose, and some for Rose's folks in Pete's World before S4 ... so we'll just have to see what urge hits me first.

Date: 2008-03-13 12:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kitsune17.livejournal.com
::applauds::

Fantastic ending.

Date: 2008-03-13 01:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kalleah.livejournal.com
Thank you, thank you.

Date: 2008-03-13 12:47 am (UTC)
glory_jean: (Default)
From: [personal profile] glory_jean
Great ending.

::joins applause::

Now I can go back the beginning of the series and start all over again.

Date: 2008-03-13 01:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kalleah.livejournal.com
Now I can go back the beginning of the series and start all over again.

That is so flattering, that you'd want to read it all again. Thanks.

Date: 2008-03-13 12:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jesidres.livejournal.com
Ooooooooh. Wow. Brilliant, sweet and poignant. *sigh* Does it have to be over?

Date: 2008-03-13 01:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kalleah.livejournal.com
Does it have to be over?

This one? Yes. In general? No. :)

Date: 2008-03-13 01:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fishface44.livejournal.com
What a perfect conclusion! I love the idea of the return to Arisbe so much later to see how things ended up and to bring back the Wittener's. A very Doctor and Rose moment! I also loved the Doctor making sure that the other responsible party had to pay some kind of price for their part in the scheme.

I love your stories, and look forward to whatever you write next! Thank you!

Date: 2008-03-13 01:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kalleah.livejournal.com
I love the idea of the return to Arisbe so much later to see how things ended up and to bring back the Wittener's.

Thanks. I liked that, too -- seemed like the right way to end things.

Date: 2008-03-13 01:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wirepatch.livejournal.com
Beautiful. ♥

Date: 2008-03-13 01:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kalleah.livejournal.com
Thanks. :)

Date: 2008-03-13 01:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] outforawalk.livejournal.com
I'm the Doctor, and I'm telling you to run.

You know, if I were to receive that phone call, I don't know that I would even stop to pack. Yikes.

I loved this story and I am going to miss Jonah in particular.

Date: 2008-03-13 01:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kalleah.livejournal.com
You know, if I were to receive that phone call, I don't know that I would even stop to pack. Yikes.

Ha. That was definitely the intent.

I am going to miss Jonah in particular.

I'll come back to him at some point, although probably not at great length. I do have to answer the question of the baby's gender.

Date: 2008-03-13 01:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] qtrhorserider.livejournal.com
Bravo. I love that you "tie up" lose ends, you sort of weave them back into the whole fabric of the story.

Bravo, of course implies the existence of encore! Stands and claps with the rest of your audience.

Date: 2008-03-13 01:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kalleah.livejournal.com
I love that you "tie up" lose ends, you sort of weave them back into the whole fabric of the story.

Thanks. I like to come back to little bits and pieces from time to time, and to try to keep a steady narrative going (although, heaven knows, this one was long enough).

There will be more, of course.

Date: 2008-03-13 01:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] np-complete.livejournal.com
:: applauds ::

I love that we went back to Arisbe, that we got to see that, yes, it all worked out, all that effort paid off. Arisbe was transformed, just as everyone hoped.

Date: 2008-03-13 01:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kalleah.livejournal.com
I love that we went back to Arisbe, that we got to see that, yes, it all worked out, all that effort paid off. Arisbe was transformed, just as everyone hoped.

I do love a happy ending, when I can manage it.

I can't say thank you enough for all your help and feedback, but THANK YOU.

Date: 2008-03-13 02:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] karenor.livejournal.com
Awww, it's really over? :(

It was a lovely ending... I love how they didn't just forget about everything after leaving. Also, Doctor of Righteous Indignation is scary. Well done. *claps*

Will there be more in this universe?

Date: 2008-03-13 02:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kalleah.livejournal.com
I love how they didn't just forget about everything after leaving.

I don't want them to run and never look back. I hope they've come farther than that.

Also, Doctor of Righteous Indignation is scary.

YAY! I'm tickled that you think so.

Will there be more in this universe?

Absolutely.

Date: 2008-03-13 02:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ciel42.livejournal.com
Beautiful! The Doctor is terrible, bt oh so wonderful, and you convey that perfectly.

I can't wait to read more of this series. It is one of my favourites ever. And I'm starting to miss Jacob a bit :) Please continue writing this :)

Thanks for sharing!

Date: 2008-03-13 02:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kalleah.livejournal.com
The Doctor is terrible, bt oh so wonderful, and you convey that perfectly.

It's a little of the old "don't make me come in there" parental trick.

I can't wait to read more of this series. It is one of my favourites ever. And I'm starting to miss Jacob a bit :) Please continue writing this :)

I will write more in this continuity, absolutely. I'm working on a story with Jacob now ... and Nine. Not sure when it will be done.

Date: 2008-03-13 02:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
Maybe it's wrong, but he said this: "I'm the Doctor, and I'm telling you to run." And I kind of fainted of the sexy...

But the rest of it was just gorgeous. Such a trim ending. I adored it.

Date: 2008-03-13 02:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kalleah.livejournal.com
Maybe it's wrong, but he said this: "I'm the Doctor, and I'm telling you to run." And I kind of fainted of the sexy...

If it's wrong, who wants to be right? Heh.

Such a trim ending.

Possibly the nicest compliment I can imagine after 80,000 words. :)
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Date: 2008-03-14 12:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kalleah.livejournal.com
Some one actually listened to the "no second chances" bit? Finally!

At least for the short term, yes.

Any sequels planned?

Yes, although I'm still playing around with what, when, whom.

Date: 2008-03-13 02:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jigglykat.livejournal.com
Lovely. Just lovely. I've enjoyed reading this one and I can't wait for what comes next!

Date: 2008-03-14 02:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kalleah.livejournal.com
I can't wait for what comes next!

Really ... me, neither. :)

Date: 2008-03-13 05:20 am (UTC)
themusecalliope: Vulpes Vulpes (DWMTenRoseHug)
From: [personal profile] themusecalliope
Well ended!
I hope that they finally make it somewhere warm.
*Happy sigh*

Thank you.

Date: 2008-03-14 12:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kalleah.livejournal.com
I hope that they finally make it somewhere warm.

Let's hope so. :)

Date: 2008-03-13 06:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lostwolfchats.livejournal.com
Love the scary Doctor phone call - perfect.

Date: 2008-03-14 12:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kalleah.livejournal.com
Love the scary Doctor phone call - perfect.

I rather like the way it came out myself. Thanks.

Date: 2008-03-13 06:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] torn-eledhwen.livejournal.com
Woohoo! What a great ending - very satisfying and fitting. I really liked the way you showed both sides of the Doctor just in this short epilogue. Very excellent story throughout; I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Date: 2008-03-14 12:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kalleah.livejournal.com
I really liked the way you showed both sides of the Doctor just in this short epilogue.

He's such a rich character -- he's not a straightforward good guy, either. It's what makes him so appealing.

Date: 2008-03-13 06:14 pm (UTC)
ext_11604: (Doc. Who-Confidential Run)
From: [identity profile] effulgent-girl.livejournal.com
Loved the ending. The Doctor can be quite scary on the phone. I liked seeing that Arisbe is a full-fledged nice planet now. Enjoyed the whole story all the way through and can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve next:)

Date: 2008-03-14 12:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kalleah.livejournal.com
Enjoyed the whole story all the way through and can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve next:)

Thank you. I'll be back soon enough. :)

Date: 2008-03-13 08:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blackcat-1.livejournal.com
"I'm the voice you'll hear in every nightmare you'll have for the rest of your life. I'm the conscience you stopped listening to years ago. I'm the fear you feel when a dark shadow follows you at night. I'm the Doctor, and I'm telling you to run."

That line is so The Doctor.

"Yes," he said simply. "I do think that." He came behind her and wrapped his arms around her waist, letting his chin rest on her shoulder. His long coat flapped wildly around them.

A simple, yet beautifully illustrated picture, creating the perfect visual for this scene.

Date: 2008-03-14 12:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kalleah.livejournal.com
That line is so The Doctor.

I'm glad you think so.

A simple, yet beautifully illustrated picture, creating the perfect visual for this scene.

Thank you.

Date: 2008-03-16 07:42 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] nonelvis
I've *finally* finished reading all this, and I am really envious of your ability to carry the plot and characters through such a long arc. (Much longer than you intended, I know, but still.) Wonderful work, as always.

I should probably also tell you that the conversation about marriage in the previous chapter made me laugh so hard I started coughing.

Date: 2008-03-16 11:09 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] platypus
I am in awe of [livejournal.com profile] kalleah's ability to navigate between the varied arguments of those who did and didn't want the Doctor and Rose to get married and come up with something unique (and awesome) enough to please everybody.

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Date: 2008-04-12 02:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vinceliav.livejournal.com
Okay, so really really late this time (by almost a month lol) But absolutely loved it :) *applauds*

Date: 2008-04-12 03:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kalleah.livejournal.com
I'm so glad. Thanks!

Date: 2010-07-12 05:39 am (UTC)
captaintish: (Dr. Who -- 10th Doctor & Rose & and Tard)
From: [personal profile] captaintish
Hi! Just wanted to pop in and tell you that I just finished reading this story and I absolutely loved it. (I downloaded it from Teaspoon and read it on my ebook reader). It was just like reading an actual Doctor Who novel, only better, because it's so well-written. I love the plot, and the relationship between the Doctor and Rose, and you created all of these fully developed original characters.

The whole thing was just completely excellent!

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