The violence was appropriate within the context of the story and not gratuitous or glamourised (and I suspect your subsequent chapters will deal with how unglamourous violence actually is).
Thank you; I was definitely worried about how everyone would react. Yes, the consequences of this make up a good bit of the end of the story.
And don't worry about the italics stuff. I got what you were saying :) and I like the new icon!
![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
no subject
Date: 2007-11-10 05:05 pm (UTC)Thank you; I was definitely worried about how everyone would react. Yes, the consequences of this make up a good bit of the end of the story.
And don't worry about the italics stuff. I got what you were saying :) and I like the new icon!