I think I'm liking this best of all your stories. I, too, really loved the scene with the children, but the one with Connor was impressive too. The technical side was very well done and convincing, and it's hard to get men talking realistically in a work setting because they don't show their emotions there as a general rule, so I think you handled the tension between them really well.
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Date: 2007-07-28 08:57 pm (UTC)