I really enjoyed the small details you've added, like Jackie giving Rose condoms, and the mention of the Doctor being 'a wonderfully heavy breather' did funny things to my insides, let me tell you.
Thanks! I'm glad I'm not the only one with the "heavy breathing" preference. ;)
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Date: 2009-04-18 02:16 am (UTC)Thanks! I'm glad I'm not the only one with the "heavy breathing" preference. ;)