For a one-sentence sex scene, that was really quite lovely.
Technically, it was a paragraph. ;)
I fixed the italics -- funny, it was noted that was in the original doc and then LJ just didn't add it as it normally does. ::shrugs:: Anyway, it's done.
I had to have him make the bed. It just seemed necessary.
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Date: 2007-03-15 11:50 pm (UTC)Technically, it was a paragraph. ;)
I fixed the italics -- funny, it was noted that was in the original doc and then LJ just didn't add it as it normally does. ::shrugs:: Anyway, it's done.
I had to have him make the bed. It just seemed necessary.