ext_24624 ([identity profile] karenor.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] kalleah 2007-11-08 04:49 am (UTC)

Well, I for one think you handled the action brilliantly. No overkill with it or anything. I loved the pacing of this chapter, as well.

And nice bits of characterization involving the guilt the Doctor carries. Can't wait for more. :)

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