Ooooo!! What a great idea, to have Jonah know who the saboteur is, and the way he told Rose was just brilliant.
Seeing the Doctor and Emelia interact was also great--you so clearly address all the emotions that Emelia must be feeling when she looks at the Doctor.
And what a cliffhanger! I can't wait for the next part.
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Date: 2007-09-30 12:43 pm (UTC)Seeing the Doctor and Emelia interact was also great--you so clearly address all the emotions that Emelia must be feeling when she looks at the Doctor.
And what a cliffhanger! I can't wait for the next part.