ext_10127 ([identity profile] dettiot.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] kalleah 2007-08-17 12:12 am (UTC)

I liked the action in this chapter. How much the Doctor was able to reach out to Jonah, how Emelia reacted to the Doctor's revelations, and how their significant others took care of them. Very nicely done!
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