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ext_23543 ([identity profile] starlightmoonla.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] kalleah 2007-04-20 01:49 am (UTC)

Lovely chapter. Rose's message to her mum was well done and I was alos quite glad to see that Rose didn't start crying. You really do a great job at getting us hooked into a particular moment, especially in this chapter, when Rose and the Doctor were on their way towards the TARDIS. One could really feel somewhat scared over the possibility of something going wrong.

Needless to say but I can't wait for the next chapter when the message is delivered and for when the Doctor returns.

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