I like - the quiet anguish, both of Rose saying goodbye to her mum and their worry for the Doctor going back into Torchwood. He's still covered in Void stuff, I assume, not to mention the danger from the Daleks and Cybermen. :(

Rose's message to her mum is lovely. A personal preference: I'd have liked the Doctor to say something too - reassurance that he'll look after Rose, maybe, some good wishes for her and Pete and Mickey too, maybe. Though perhaps he'll add that himself later?