I loved your story, though I was shocked that the Doctor let Anahit kill the soldiers, though I don't see how else they could have gotten out of that situation. Allowing Watson to stay on the planet and live in Yarru was a nice touch, and after all the Yarruni had just been through, it was very open-minded of them, particularly Arri, to let a human stay among them. Bell's fate confused me a bit, but I guess he deserved it, since he could have tried to stop the soldiers and chose not to. The choice between what is right and what is easy, I suppose.

I've much enjoyed reading your stories on Teaspoon and look forward to reading more.