This is great; I can't believe that you'll have this resolved in another two chapters!

I am reminded of the Doctor locking Rose in a cupboard (or was it a bathroom?) in The Hidden Well (I know it was an additional scene you wrote as a bit of fun, but is it in your canon that it actually happened?). I'm glad he didn't try that on again!


He removed her hand from in front of his face and curled his fingers around it. "That's the problem, Rose. I can't forget that it's you."

Oh my, they are just so sweet.