Okay, I had told myself that I wasn't going to review until I had finished reading the series, but I couldn't help it, not after this chapter. My god, that was awesome. I loved the angst and feelings that you give to this characters. Especially the Doctor. Before Rose left, we didn't get to see how things really affected him. We knew his feelings in regards to the Time War, but he never really said anything. And then with Rose gone, we can see more...he still doesn't say anything, but we know him well enough now to know exactly what he's feeling with missing Rose.
Which brings me to my point and the reason I had to write the review. I love imagining all the different ways The Doctor has tried to deal with losing Rose, but I have to say that I love your shampoo idea the best. Here I was, just reading along and enjoying the story and then you wrote those few little sentences about the shampoo and body lotion bottles all lined in a row with the caps off and I just about cried. Rose got a little pain from it, but I almost fell out of my chair! I could see him standing there in her bathroom, clutching the bottle and trying so hard not to let the tears fall and it broke my heart! Awesome writing and description. I loved it. Now I'm going to go and finish this lovely web your weaving. Awesome job.
P.s This is the longest review I've written in my life...and I ramble a lot so this is a great testament to your write abilities. Keep going with it!
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Which brings me to my point and the reason I had to write the review. I love imagining all the different ways The Doctor has tried to deal with losing Rose, but I have to say that I love your shampoo idea the best. Here I was, just reading along and enjoying the story and then you wrote those few little sentences about the shampoo and body lotion bottles all lined in a row with the caps off and I just about cried. Rose got a little pain from it, but I almost fell out of my chair! I could see him standing there in her bathroom, clutching the bottle and trying so hard not to let the tears fall and it broke my heart! Awesome writing and description. I loved it. Now I'm going to go and finish this lovely web your weaving. Awesome job.
P.s This is the longest review I've written in my life...and I ramble a lot so this is a great testament to your write abilities. Keep going with it!